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8 `; r& W5 F, k1 j; m3 B我试着从Duff的英文版转译过来开头几段。这个本子比Rowe和Ridley的都要新,读起来稍微顺一点。翻译的时候尽量带上韵脚,其实史诗本来就气势磅礴,浑然天成,韵脚反而有胖脚之嫌。这里只是游戏之作,为你捧捧场。
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伐刹利阿6 U, e6 r/ x: G, G' H
, t/ F& [! P( C9 p- F1 c: @我所吟唱的战争,
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何止是兄弟相残,) f7 T, T1 H7 B; Y, Y
正道屈从于罪孽。
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$ k2 n; w% p% N& ]. R听我为你们叙述,
, a1 I7 P" V5 C' X/ G+ y) L6 u一个伟大的民族,
6 `, r4 T4 F# }* x( ^ J- L竟把胜利的右手,3 C; [- e% N$ _$ h$ `4 a7 `; H
扼向自己的肺腑;
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巨头协议已撕裂,( H% Q; }! J* e) x! T+ S; c
世界在震荡瓦解;2 d: f2 e# C' v
骨肉间拼力厮杀, H2 u# b- Z8 s! V1 F
沦落到罪人之列。
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* Q0 M5 t$ p. Y6 L; Q% o; x8 R同样的军旗,* _) m6 Q/ [* A4 {
同样的鹰徽,7 o: ^1 G2 \ C" ]
还有同样的投枪,
, d# z( J z! r3 J C7 e却是交战的双方。
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我的国人们啊,
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, D7 j2 Z, k# ^) d以屠杀作为献祭
7 [9 `3 k. H8 B4 K7 c这是怎样的疯狂?! O, d# K- x( _. W, r: ?% C2 n
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克拉苏游荡的冤魂,; Z; ]5 f! E- D. N8 f1 Q
为他复仇者何人?5 E0 A, A9 l2 a
你们本该扫荡巴比伦," y8 F" V' ]2 b% V
夺回来自意大利的战利品!. t9 S. s# d# s) c' z1 f) A
' T% x* ?8 Z8 b" l$ q; Z你们却向敌国展现,& ]% X4 ]6 b8 t: o
罗马人血泊的奇观;5 [" G+ X& Q! K T+ a+ T* _! s' O1 ?
纵然赢得了战争,
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罗马人手中的鲜血,
* e2 @% k( g- h8 z+ {9 I* M本应换得多少土地和海洋:/ N5 P$ P2 z) y- B R) C2 L/ d
从太阳升起之处,
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到那锁住春天,
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# M4 H/ y$ @' ]+ G部分原文
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Of war I sing, war worse than civil," X/ S8 N+ T# H( V/ l: c
waged over the plains of Emathia,& B( X. u% _, J6 [; w
and of legality conferred on crime ;5 D: r, Y# a8 ^% \5 S. L# Z
I tell how an imperial people
; e; q1 M( {" b! Yturned their victorious right hands against their own vitals ; " Z: ]5 W* q8 y& |% s% b1 [$ ~
how kindred fought against kindred ;
& }1 g" \) f2 x0 J V/ h6 _4 fhow, when the compact of tyranny was shattered,
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|% z7 E9 r1 ~) Y" hto make mankind guilty; 5 w& L/ h- N3 V. y; h$ i( `& L# x. ?
how standards confronted hostile standards, 2 ]( G9 u9 D9 d' J* G5 K, v
eagles were matched against each other,
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5 u1 C6 f0 V! y7 VWhat madness was this, my countrymen, " T2 n& z: o" ]; l9 n+ J
what fierce orgy of slaughter ? - D# A( K1 a n q% w
While the ghost of Crassus % t0 Q, D. a @2 Y& O$ y
still wandered unavenged, and it was your duty to + C5 z1 x' w8 U6 {7 @
rob proud Babylon of her trophies over Italy,
4 F- l. T- e" y, R8 U# kdid you choose to give to hated nations the spectacle of
" H8 w, A3 t KRoman bloodshed, and to wage wars that could win 9 z$ v& u4 d* j. ~: V% F# A
no triumphs ?& c( ?. p% x5 f' a" J: s
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