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本帖最后由 石工 于 2016-11-5 01:49 编辑 # J# ~( p5 k$ V G: K9 u0 U, B
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我试着从Duff的英文版转译过来开头几段。这个本子比Rowe和Ridley的都要新,读起来稍微顺一点。翻译的时候尽量带上韵脚,其实史诗本来就气势磅礴,浑然天成,韵脚反而有胖脚之嫌。这里只是游戏之作,为你捧捧场。# r( N* C$ o: e( j, S0 D! ^9 Y
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我所吟唱的战争,
3 r4 o3 i# N) {! M/ r3 i& n- b在埃马提亚原野;
) F. h7 O( Y4 y& s何止是兄弟相残,
2 Y1 S" o6 U: w3 |2 L( ]" z; m6 D正道屈从于罪孽。1 G1 [% ~6 ~! y, h: B6 o: a
* U$ \) N' H* e# q0 ^ D* }听我为你们叙述,- Q; l$ C9 q( z$ X7 S L+ J
一个伟大的民族,& f: c4 K6 S3 L }8 t$ i
竟把胜利的右手,* H* f7 M. J/ z: Y
扼向自己的肺腑;
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' a5 l9 j6 H& Y' J) R& y$ y( D6 j巨头协议已撕裂,
0 v# l* p( i, L% v9 |世界在震荡瓦解;5 k" D1 e N! `7 N# v1 w; b
骨肉间拼力厮杀; w+ X& m9 J- E$ q7 [' b
沦落到罪人之列。
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; y* `0 A: P. L- T4 `2 A同样的军旗,: B# |1 P8 T- K
同样的鹰徽,, o! c8 g. }7 Z0 e% U |
还有同样的投枪,+ G2 a, G: A4 X& @) U: Q7 H
却是交战的双方。% O9 M8 a1 G* N" g" x3 q
5 _8 B; n+ n2 D h$ T5 s6 }我的国人们啊,
3 y( Q) W% o3 m6 ]7 v你们的淫祀如此放浪0 `" p1 O' P/ r; Z' ]* t
以屠杀作为献祭2 }# Q) P0 E# O4 A+ C. y! d
这是怎样的疯狂?; S' X+ {; S7 _$ w
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克拉苏游荡的冤魂,
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. ]8 L0 v/ b/ l4 Q' W你们本该扫荡巴比伦,$ e/ b5 \* r, B; B" U. I/ f! i
夺回来自意大利的战利品!
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+ H& z# X. v1 q8 W2 T你们却向敌国展现,- k: J* H& I! p. U" X
罗马人血泊的奇观;; I2 q' }; q# w
纵然赢得了战争,5 q1 J; F! x/ D% f
也绝不会有凯旋。7 Q7 l3 V3 [: r c) x# H4 D, i
5 P! p' {2 B1 ~罗马人手中的鲜血,: U+ l' t- T# i/ e) N; q# j
本应换得多少土地和海洋:
$ c. a$ p. l2 d* I从太阳升起之处,
6 ~! d, K/ a: Y* _6 x' I* q到星辰隐入夜幕的地方;/ j2 m/ m1 H7 D; }* z* a/ T( q8 R" a
从暑气灼烧的南国,
8 [' q8 [: H1 K2 ~: S* K/ G到那锁住春天,1 T3 N4 C4 L* V
冰封西徐亚海的- u' D- V# [% D$ @& K* i% ]
严冬之乡。
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Of war I sing, war worse than civil,
; p) Q$ o& M" h& Dwaged over the plains of Emathia,/ [2 h" a4 U4 ?9 X
and of legality conferred on crime ;
- _7 g# s9 q: m% h1 k4 y3 G0 F I tell how an imperial people
! `' d( a: b3 C1 Z, iturned their victorious right hands against their own vitals ;
( c f% [- I4 `% S% M/ h9 r/ Mhow kindred fought against kindred ; * `, k$ ]' Q9 \) c& u
how, when the compact of tyranny was shattered,
1 D' T6 R# B; f7 L" Q+ D5 fall the forces of the shaken world contended; n( L! p) u" \
to make mankind guilty;
/ r; F4 h& c( O* M( Qhow standards confronted hostile standards,
5 `2 B+ U/ z) [7 l8 _& t4 Eeagles were matched against each other, ; t+ j; ?( m! s. O' P, n: v
and pilum threatened pilum. 9 L" K3 e. \/ s* D) }1 N
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0 n- ^. Z5 L, {$ D1 C: fWhat madness was this, my countrymen, % a% a; K+ M; O5 G; x, V* ]
what fierce orgy of slaughter ? ' V1 _4 o8 H$ I, f/ }; l" H ]( \* W
While the ghost of Crassus
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- P1 ~5 \- Y+ ^* C/ m$ ~+ wrob proud Babylon of her trophies over Italy, & c: S5 ^0 r2 _, u6 M( z
did you choose to give to hated nations the spectacle of
- d+ a. x1 Q& c" y) t3 N5 c& } oRoman bloodshed, and to wage wars that could win
4 x% P& c2 u, `2 ]$ A7 z; zno triumphs ?
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