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- r4 {, O. d8 h我试着从Duff的英文版转译过来开头几段。这个本子比Rowe和Ridley的都要新,读起来稍微顺一点。翻译的时候尽量带上韵脚,其实史诗本来就气势磅礴,浑然天成,韵脚反而有胖脚之嫌。这里只是游戏之作,为你捧捧场。
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我所吟唱的战争,
# G! U, U5 B2 c5 d+ J1 g. z+ x在埃马提亚原野;
; R7 l- r# G. n, w5 ?1 x何止是兄弟相残,
4 o4 l) S- w9 O6 v( F Z正道屈从于罪孽。
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2 m" x4 F3 I9 f4 C+ ^听我为你们叙述,
' `7 _2 u; G* l! t( @4 J$ }一个伟大的民族,: j6 e j8 A* y* L
竟把胜利的右手,( B: \2 |! g0 t/ w
扼向自己的肺腑;
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. D& }7 |* ?! |( T' k) D巨头协议已撕裂,
" ]2 O5 {3 X8 C' A7 D+ Y& ?- [世界在震荡瓦解;9 Q: g/ ^# {7 l; |4 h% J$ D' ^
骨肉间拼力厮杀! Y) A2 S+ i( _( j3 z% x
沦落到罪人之列。* ~* [! b" A7 m" [
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同样的军旗,
0 S7 B' w! H8 H2 l" m0 ~* N同样的鹰徽,+ T6 @% F: L4 t3 t3 m( L
还有同样的投枪,
' Q: ^8 O4 g5 f9 N* T" E' n+ \却是交战的双方。
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我的国人们啊,
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以屠杀作为献祭; Z+ i1 O; I4 Q, B
这是怎样的疯狂?$ \2 Y0 P4 H: ]% l
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克拉苏游荡的冤魂,
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4 ~4 W) P6 {" b" q你们本该扫荡巴比伦,
; D! c5 {0 U( g: m1 z! S+ i- e夺回来自意大利的战利品!6 L( x* E o# i, W
( w( B# f6 ^- G6 @* M3 M0 m你们却向敌国展现,4 g6 I& L2 g0 L* m
罗马人血泊的奇观;
$ H8 V; [; b# \! g" s纵然赢得了战争,
. g$ M, i2 [' \也绝不会有凯旋。( }! R& z7 `. `- `! y
8 O. p& F9 ~: F, r" S& Q; r7 X罗马人手中的鲜血, o' @- ^: T1 [ o' J4 S; i" T
本应换得多少土地和海洋:
, q4 ]7 f% [ J' L+ ~. |0 k从太阳升起之处,, I- C4 y, p& I' B' f6 J* v( n5 G: d
到星辰隐入夜幕的地方;- H8 q* ~4 I# g; n
从暑气灼烧的南国,' N/ U: M9 r& k6 d6 y
到那锁住春天,
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严冬之乡。
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Of war I sing, war worse than civil,4 s% _& L! ?9 u/ h2 S N
waged over the plains of Emathia,* `% w5 M/ ~: Y# ]/ r! c( c* d& B
and of legality conferred on crime ;6 ^+ Q; S0 `" R' w8 g3 O
I tell how an imperial people 0 {2 S- j6 q6 y! Y" H, {
turned their victorious right hands against their own vitals ;
8 K0 O; f5 D4 A) {how kindred fought against kindred ;
3 y! A/ q8 U6 Z0 v: Whow, when the compact of tyranny was shattered,
7 R7 L- N' i3 @all the forces of the shaken world contended
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how standards confronted hostile standards,
5 j$ z) q' }2 W! }, g4 M; zeagles were matched against each other, ! b6 t& n. _2 e3 e
and pilum threatened pilum. # e1 x6 k* F/ \! m
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What madness was this, my countrymen, 7 H( k! T) ~& r5 l
what fierce orgy of slaughter ? ) i' P2 _ C6 @. m a) ^% f
While the ghost of Crassus W( U: H/ k5 B* D% M
still wandered unavenged, and it was your duty to
# O$ P) U, f+ `( D# X1 ?8 ~, `rob proud Babylon of her trophies over Italy, 7 V/ P- c2 m' y/ Z/ o5 E2 `+ x [" \
did you choose to give to hated nations the spectacle of , D9 M: K' p$ b' V6 p
Roman bloodshed, and to wage wars that could win / o& Y% R+ b. V+ _
no triumphs ?4 p3 }+ R# a, O8 J
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