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构思中没有双关啊~~~哦!不怀好意~~~赫,俺改成‘古仁心’如何?
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怕啥啊~~~你那神筐,又拆不坏:)
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看人家楚天就没读出双关来嘛!
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哈哈~~~筐里要发大水啦:)
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掂量了半天之后,还是选了欲~~~我想这里还是比较主观的。遇则是客观陈述多一点。
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