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[评论] 【网上谈诗】大家一起来,七嘴八舌评论咏花七律 |
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咋不砸砸偶的呢~~~甭客气么:)
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哈哈,还纠结这‘满意/不满意’啊:)
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估计是说意思尚可,表达不到位~~~
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应该不是~~~七句有点刻意了。六句也有点,可能还是原来的好点~~~回头去翻上来:)
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