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[律诗] 【七律】学黄仲则写情诗 (翻晒旧谷子:) |
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只是“似”与“时”站不齐~~~俺最虚这些虚字了,老师得帮个忙呀!
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麻花辫子~~~没听过呀?悄悄告诉你,这是凑的作业:) 我以前还跟人家写过8首‘夏夜怀人’,东拉西扯的最后连中学的闺密都拉来凑数啦!
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不是呢~~~是筐师说有意思的那句:)
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枝上黄莺似解人~~~人家勉强只取这句
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