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[结集] 【诗不厌改】山菊咏物楼(个人收藏版:) |
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晓暮换成早晚如何?
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图片是淡鸟送的,这首头两句就是从此图来的:)
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这个因为已经有诗友书写就不准备改了:)
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皎月先生点评:见寄慨,惜不能厚之。(嗯,不能满足有学问读者鉴证自己学问的欲望:)
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皎月先生点评:点评:句见思致。(嗯~~~仍是不厚:)
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