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作者: 美国风中秋叶 时间: 2012-7-24 23:27
标题: 七律--读雪夜小筑
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七律--读雪夜小筑/ 风中秋叶

隆冬雪落梨花瓣，老树横斜月影明。屋冷灯孤修自静，天低野旷锁空灵。

一舟沧海诗心远，百度浮云名利轻。过眼寒琼休在意，随缘大界放轻行。

作者: mike05 时间: 2012-7-25 00:36
月下吹寒花六瓣，琼山入照梦中明。柴门敞处风来静，洞户深时隐去灵。欲问婵娟何事远，未曾言语又思轻。梁园自古多少意，尽赋吟哦扶晓行。

作者: 山菊 时间: 2012-7-25 03:48
一舟沧海诗心远，百度浮云名利轻~~~好对

作者: benhuashu 时间: 2012-7-27 11:20

好图！让人想起萝卜霜的湿：林属谁我熟，林中有其屋，悄然我矗立，看雪满林路。......

作者: 美国风中秋叶 时间: 2012-7-28 05:20

benhuashu 发表于 2012-7-27 11:20
好图！让人想起萝卜霜的湿：林属谁我熟，林中有其屋，悄然我矗立，看雪满林路。...... ...

感谢朋友关注并分享佳作，这里是另一诗友半榻清风赠诗如下：

雪霁空山野径横，疏篱院落牖灯明。闲云绕月应无意，老树摇风自有灵。

半榻诗书文趣远，一炊飧味素烟轻。浮名且闭寒门外，暮唱朝吟任我行。

作者: 美国风中秋叶 时间: 2012-7-28 05:22

山菊发表于 2012-7-25 03:48
一舟沧海诗心远，百度浮云名利轻~~~好对

多谢山菊老师关注并点评。能否唱和一首？

作者: benhuashu 时间: 2012-7-28 14:07

美国风中秋叶发表于 2012-7-28 05:20
感谢朋友关注并分享佳作，这里是另一诗友半榻清风赠诗如下：

雪霁空山野径横，疏篱院落牖灯明。闲云绕月 ...

抱歉抱歉，得罪得罪，还是把原作抄在这里吧。

Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening

BY ROBERT FROST

Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.

My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.

He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.

The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.

Robert Frost, “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” from The Poetry of Robert Frost, edited by Edward Connery Lathem. Copyright 1923, © 1969 by Henry Holt and Company, Inc., renewed 1951, by Robert Frost. Reprinted with the permission of Henry Holt and Company, LLC.

Source: The Random House Book of Poetry for Children (1983)

作者: 山菊 时间: 2012-7-29 01:35

美国风中秋叶发表于 2012-7-27 16:22
多谢山菊老师关注并点评。能否唱和一首？

俺临屏最多就能整四句，还得在有感觉的时候。七律平时我看着就怕，更何况我住的地方不下雪~~~这个作业只好翘课啦：）

作者: 散木轩主人 时间: 2012-7-30 03:37

山菊发表于 2012-7-29 01:35
俺临屏最多就能整四句，还得在有感觉的时候。七律平时我看着就怕，更何况我住的地方不下雪~~~这个作业只 ...

一舟沧海诗心远，百度浮云名利轻。甚佳

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