海外逸士 发表于 2014-3-2 22:31:52

A Poem for Fun (2)

There is a bridegroom,
Born in the birth boom,
Which puts the nation in gloom.
If there'll be another such boom,
For which the world has no more room,
And humans will be in doom.
He inherits a large heirloom,
Only for him soon to toom.
He will have wedding in a ballroom.
His bride is like a beautiful bloom,
From afar she's got to loom,
Like a witch riding on a broom,
Or a yacht on the sea to spoom,
Through the hot simoom.
Oohm!

海外逸士 发表于 2014-3-2 22:37:12

為什麼外國人沒有和詩。英文好的同仁試一下。

山菊 发表于 2014-3-3 07:17:48

海外逸士 发表于 2014-3-2 09:37 static/image/common/back.gif
為什麼外國人沒有和詩。英文好的同仁試一下。

光英文好哪里够呢~~~还得懂英文诗才行啊!

海外逸士 发表于 2014-3-3 22:34:39

現在的英文詩就像中國新詩一樣﹐只要認字就能寫。找同一韻的詞即可。另一論壇上
一人用 -oon詞。就是沒寫好。因為她不是詩人﹐沒詩感。
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