七律--读雪夜小筑
本帖最后由 美国风中秋叶 于 2015-3-17 03:20 编辑七律--读雪夜小筑/ 风中秋叶
隆冬雪落梨花瓣，老树横斜月影明。屋冷灯孤修自静，天低野旷锁空灵。
一舟沧海诗心远，百度浮云名利轻。过眼寒琼休在意，随缘大界放轻行。
月下吹寒花六瓣，琼山入照梦中明。柴门敞处风来静，洞户深时隐去灵。欲问婵娟何事远，未曾言语又思轻。梁园自古多少意，尽赋吟哦扶晓行。 一舟沧海诗心远，百度浮云名利轻~~~好对{:222:}
好图！让人想起萝卜霜的湿：林属谁我熟，林中有其屋，悄然我矗立，看雪满林路。...... benhuashu 发表于 2012-7-27 11:20 static/image/common/back.gif
好图！让人想起萝卜霜的湿：林属谁我熟，林中有其屋，悄然我矗立，看雪满林路。...... ...
感谢朋友关注并分享佳作，这里是另一诗友半榻清风赠诗如下：
雪霁空山野径横，疏篱院落牖灯明。闲云绕月应无意，老树摇风自有灵。
半榻诗书文趣远，一炊飧味素烟轻。 浮名且闭寒门外，暮唱朝吟任我行。
山菊 发表于 2012-7-25 03:48 static/image/common/back.gif
一舟沧海诗心远，百度浮云名利轻~~~好对
多谢山菊老师关注并点评。能否唱和一首？ 美国风中秋叶 发表于 2012-7-28 05:20 static/image/common/back.gif
感谢朋友关注并分享佳作，这里是另一诗友半榻清风赠诗如下：
雪霁空山野径横，疏篱院落牖灯明。闲云绕月 ...
抱歉抱歉，得罪得罪，还是把原作抄在这里吧。
Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening
BY ROBERT FROST
Whose woods these are I think I know.
His house is in the village though;
He will not see me stopping here
To watch his woods fill up with snow.
My little horse must think it queer
To stop without a farmhouse near
Between the woods and frozen lake
The darkest evening of the year.
He gives his harness bells a shake
To ask if there is some mistake.
The only other sound’s the sweep
Of easy wind and downy flake.
The woods are lovely, dark and deep.
But I have promises to keep,
And miles to go before I sleep,
And miles to go before I sleep.
Robert Frost, “Stopping by Woods on a Snowy Evening” from The Poetry of Robert Frost, edited by Edward Connery Lathem. Copyright 1923, © 1969 by Henry Holt and Company, Inc., renewed 1951, by Robert Frost. Reprinted with the permission of Henry Holt and Company, LLC.
Source: The Random House Book of Poetry for Children (1983) 美国风中秋叶 发表于 2012-7-27 16:22 static/image/common/back.gif
多谢山菊老师关注并点评。能否唱和一首？
俺临屏最多就能整四句，还得在有感觉的时候。七律平时我看着就怕，更何况我住的地方不下雪~~~这个作业只好翘课啦：）
山菊 发表于 2012-7-29 01:35 static/image/common/back.gif
俺临屏最多就能整四句，还得在有感觉的时候。七律平时我看着就怕，更何况我住的地方不下雪~~~这个作业只 ...
一舟沧海诗心远，百度浮云名利轻。甚佳:victory:
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